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I love an ekphrastic and this is proof that poetic forms we might think of as nothing but wordplay or for children (e.g., abecedarians or acrostics) can be very sophisticated and serious.

Leaving the Psychologist: An Abecedarian Ekphrastic by Grisel Y. Acosta

after Remedios Varo’s Mujer saliendo del psicoanalista

another face has sprouted in my chest
beastly, that’s me, a super freak
cavorting with your skull in my grasp
displaced personalities cannot be cloaked
ever, they will grow like a haunted
fever of wispy hair
gathered in a basket, along with time, a
half-filled vial of poison &
illusions of tick-tock-clocking syringe
just let me explain:
killing myself is not an option
let me try to live with my
multiple personas and their infinite masks, why
not weave them into a poncho
of chartreuse green, grow them,
pouch them, wear them like horns
question my memories, befriend
radical thoughts and nightmares
solemn my specters behind
tenuous doors with intimidating bells
understand the unexplainable, develop
venom as Tilda Swinton couture
when dreams become a snail shell planted
X, marks the spot of this treasure I shall reveal,
yell on a mountain, YES, this is mine, I will
zap my fears—I can face all the faces, darling, of course I can

--

This is the work of art which inspired the piece:

varo painting

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Apr. 22nd, 2025 04:52 pm
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Title: Pernickety Poisoner
Fandom: Original
Poetic form: Abecedarian
Rating: Gen
No. of lines: 28
Prompt: Persnickety
Summary: An abecedarian about how nothing in the persnickety's poisoner's cabinet is of any use! So vexing!

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Apr. 22nd, 2025 03:42 pm
stonepicnicking_okapi: otherwords (otherwords)
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Title: Gandhi
Fandom: Original
Poetic form: kyrielle (a variation on)
No. of Lines: 28
Prompt: Ambitious
Rating: Gen
Summary: a variation on a kyrielle about the life of Gandhi

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Collage Journaling: easter blue

Apr. 20th, 2025 08:22 pm
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Last year I did an Easter blue collage, too. This is using the last of my egg nest stickers and the booklet that came with my chocolate bunny!

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Today we are looking at two stories.

"The Adventure of the Stockbroker's Clerk" was published in The Strand in March 1893.

The plot of this story is very near to that of "The Red-Headed League."

A person is lured from their designated place in order to further a financial crime. The poor victim is named...Hall Pycroft! He's lured from a new job so that someone else can take his place and rob his new employer and blame him.

"The Adventure of the Resident Patient" appeared in The Strand in August 1893.

Here we get a struggling doctor Percy Trevelyan who accepts a patient (a patient who lives with him in the practice offices) with A Past and two curious characters show up and take revenge on their former associate. This is very similar to the story of Victor Trevor's father and (in a way) to Mary Morstan's father.

I can't say either story is remarkable in my mind.

I found I had a horse sticker, so I did a collage of Silver Blaze.

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Apr. 19th, 2025 07:42 pm
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Yesterday the boys and I dyed eggs. This was the Cosmic PAAS kit (for those in the US) and it was super easy and gave a great result.

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Apr. 18th, 2025 02:21 pm
stonepicnicking_okapi: otherwords (otherwords)
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Title: Choice Piece of Heart
Fandom: Original
Rating: Gen
No. of Lines: 28
Prompt: Compassionate
Notes: a poetry remix of a gen-rated animal AU fic of mine in the BBC Sherlock fandom where Sherlock is a raven and John is a wolf: The Wolf Bird. Also a fill for [community profile] fffc: Little Special 216: Found Poetry
Summary: a raven shows compassion to an injured wolf

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Collage Journaling: Easter Egg Nests

Apr. 18th, 2025 10:14 am
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The scan isn't so great, but this turned out very pretty in RL. Here are the Easter egg nest stickers (they are raised). I have two blue egg nest stickers so I will do a blue Easter collage for Sunday.

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What I am appreciating most about the poem-a-day is the little blurb after the poem about the poem. The first poem was inspired by the second.

alameda point by David Maduli

—after lucille clifton

the estuary opens to the bay
and the bay stretches into the pacific and so on
therefore and such-and-such,
none of them empty or full
in the way no frame can minimize nor contain horizon—
yet the ocean can be it, even when sky
and sea are the same late summer gray
they blend together erasing, making
each other. the humpback whale
breaching the slate screen is the only
one who knows the tension between.
here arrive two children winding bikes
on the path to the point passing succulents
and ground squirrels, and three pelicans
follow in spinning dives to slash
down on this estuary guarded
by gurgling sea lions. the children
collecting rocks and examining mussel shells,
millennia in their hands, nod to each other and laugh
racing childhood to the pier’s edge.

the mississippi river empties into the gulf by Lucille Clifton

and the gulf enters the sea and so forth,
none of them emptying anything,
all of them carrying yesterday
forever on their white tipped backs,
all of them dragging forward tomorrow
. it is the great circulation
of the earth's body, like the blood
of the gods, this river in which the past
is always flowing. every water
is the same water coming round.
everyday someone is standing on the edge
of this river, staring into time,
whispering mistakenly:
only here. only now.

Word: Winceyette

Apr. 16th, 2025 03:16 pm
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Wednesday's word is...

...winceyette.

noun

a British flannelette of cotton napped on both sides and used especially for underwear, pajamas, and house dresses

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I found it in prompt #10 of 52 by Jo Bell: Just pay attention to a real instance of touch; the temperature, the sensation of grit or winceyette.

wynceyette
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1. It's Spring Break! The boys go back Tuesday.

2. The boys' father traveled yesterday to Seattle for meetings with the Gates Foundation. He is supposed to be back on Thursday.

3. Today was a day of running errands. As the last step of Minisculus' calorie reduction is to get 60 minutes of movement a day. So this morning I took the boys to the YMCA so he could get that.

Then we went to a store for Minor to get a new hoodie and a gift for a birthday party Minisculus was invited to new week. We used up the last of the gift card my sister gave me for Xmas.

I also stopped by Michaels and picked up 1 package of stickers. I fell in love with these Easter eggs in nests and if you buy the stickers online and pick up at the store, you get a 30% discount. They were the only Easter stickers I've seen that I liked, and I really liked them.

Then we went to the library. Then we went to Wal-Mart and I got Minor a new phone. This is going to be a source of controversy because the boys' father was against an upgrade for Minor. But what Minor had was an old-school flip phone and this is a proper phone (not on our plan). I will have to deal with the fallout from that with his father. It's a mess because I snapped on Sunday about Minor rotting his brain with his phone (and yelled at him harshly) and he proceeded to get 2 PRs (Personal Records) at the track meet and to clean my nasty, years-encrusted tea kettle with steel wool (without being asked) just to show me that his brain isn't rotted. Point to Minor.

Then we went the Mall and Minor went to the barber. Minor got a low taper fade. Whatever that is. It's not as shorn as the last time.

Then we were starving and got McDonald's and went home. Tomorrow is shopping and I have to get my state emissions test on the car and Minor has track practice. Soccer practices were cancelled but track is still going through spring break.

4. I finished Seafire last night, the girls' own Mad Max Fury at sea fantasy. It was good. I also finished Ada Limon's book of poetry The Hurting Kind, also good.

5. I wrote two poems, then lost my groove. I need to get back. Spring renewal is going well.

ASMR of the WEEK: This channel is building miniature rooms from kits.

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And a poem!

Dressing the Body by Brittany Rogers

We—Detroit girls, Daughters of Motown—
knew before we saw the bronze casket

that Aretha would be dressed down;
some—Non-believers, Outsiders—

called it frivolous: two-day
viewing; eight-hour long service;

four outfit changes, each dress
more elaborate than the last.

Beautiful, beautiful gowns—accessorized
from jewels to pointed heels. I half-

expect her to break out a side eye
belt out a hymn to remind us

who the Queen is. There is,
of course, no such performance,

though we all huddle like crows,
waiting to see if she still looks

like herself. There is a protocol to this,
a right way to send

someone back to the lap of God.
Wearing their Sunday best.

So fancy they can be
mistaken for a bride.
stonepicnicking_okapi: holmes in silohuette (holmessilouhette)
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"The Adventure of the Gloria Scott" is one of my favorite stories. This is the one where Holmes tells Watson about his first case and his friendship with Victor Trevor.

Trevor's dog bites Holmes on the ankle at university. And Trevor checks on him and they become pals.  

Apparently, there is a lot of scholarly debate on topics which don't interest me. One is where Holmes went to uni: Cambridge or Oxford. And some scholars say that Trevor Senior's account of his past is so riddled with implausibilities and inaccuracies as to be not believable.

trevor

It's a very important story because we get Holmes' origin story as a detective. Holmes gets invited to the Trevors for the holiday and he does a decent deduction of Trevor Senior and the pater familias says,

I don't know how you manage this, Mr Holmes, but it seems to me that all the detectives of fact and of fancy would be children in your hands. That's your line of life, sir, and you may take the word of a man who has seen something of the world.

'And that recommendation, with the exaggerated estimate of my ability with which he prefaced it, was, if you will believe me, Watson, the very first thing which ever made me feel that a profession might be made out of what had up to that time been the merest hobby.


And say what you will about Johns and Jameses and milk-drinking snakes with ears, but when ACD wanted to turn a phrase, he could bloody well turn it.

Of all ghosts, the ghosts of our old loves are the worst.

I did a drabble of it. I've done many before. It's just a great line.

Title: Ghosts
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes (ACD)
Rating: Gen
Length: 100
Summary: Holmes visits Trevor in Terai after the Fall.

Read more... )


gloria scott

And I love the last like about Trevor: "The good fellow was heartbroken at it, and went out to the Terai tea planting, where I hear he is doing well.

And I would like to visit the Broads one day.

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Apr. 12th, 2025 12:50 pm
stonepicnicking_okapi: otherwords (otherwords)
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Title: An Assay on Time
Prompt: Efficient
No. of Lines: 28
Rating: Gen
Poetic form: carol stanza
Summary: an assay (kind of a brainstorming poem) about the nature of time

Time flies like an arrow
Fruit flies like a rotten plum in harrow


Efficiently the clocks
Make time by multiplying nicks and knocks,
Dispensing ticks and tocks.
Time flies like an arrow!

For play, for bed, for tea,
For story and for losing merrily
Forgotten history
Fruit flies like a rotten plum in harrow!

The present is a gift.
Fine sands in the hourglass spend and shift
set best-laid plans adrift.
Time flies like an arrow!

Pleas to self: don’t forget!
But we do. We always do. And regret
is doing time unmet.
Fruit flies like a rotten plum in harrow!

there’s stitching and saving
there’s killing, wasting, waiting, and craving
carving and engraving
Time flies like an arrow!

How much more have we got?
But if it’s just an illusion, ought
we to care if we’re caught?
Fruit flies like a rotten plum in harrow!

Time flies like an arrow!
Fruit flies like a rotten plum in harrow!

Collage: four!

Apr. 11th, 2025 01:15 pm
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I was trying a pattern but I ran out of steam before I finished the fourth. Showing off some of my new haul: peach paper, red & pink gingham washi tape & hearts washi tape, Pooh hunny jar and bees and hive, and using up some of my whales. These are all in unused daily pages of my planner.



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Apr. 11th, 2025 10:59 am
stonepicnicking_okapi: lilies (lilies)
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Title: Indulgent
Prompt: Indulgent
No. of lines 28
Rating: Gen
Summary: a free form poem inspired by looking at the night's sky

the fairy lights serve no purpose.
they don’t illuminate. they don’t
enlighten. they glow (when I remember
to turn them on). pastel flowers,
something between lotus and rose,
they shine until they dim, they hang
in waist-high firmament under
the window, suspended, a spring-
like bough, under the sill on which
rest piles of seashells and a conch
and a statue of the Virgin
of Medjugorje, indulgent
and forgiving, gifts of the sea.

raise the blind, ignore the neighbors
and the dirty glass, and the screen

the night is always too wonderful
the stroke of indigo between
the darkness and light pollution;
the moon, whether absent or full,
or, like tonight, crescent and smudged
with clouds; the tilting of the head
required to partake; the stillness;
airplanes and satellites and stars.
could I be any more poet?
standing here, looking out, counting
the syllables in firmament,
indulgent, purposeless, just like
lights I’ve forgotten to turn on
stonepicnicking_okapi: otherwords (otherwords)
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Below, in the cut, I am including Section I of Louise Glück’s October which inspired this poem.

The Owl by Gia Anansi-Shakur

after Louise Glück’s “October”

Violence has changed
me something beautiful
worldly, not comfortable
living in a mouth
Read more... )

Word: Cachou

Apr. 9th, 2025 09:01 am
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Wednesday's word is...

...cachou

[kuh-shoo, ka-, kash-oo]

noun

1. a pleasant-smelling lozenge sucked to mask bad breath.

origin
late 16th century (in the sense ‘catechu’): from French, from Portuguese cachu, from Malay kacu. The current sense dates from the early 18th century

---

I found it in this poem, a modern translation of a poem of the Roman period. Showing how much can be lost or added in translation!

Time topples Statyllios like a doddery oak by Myrinos (c. 90 BC - AD 50), trans. Tony Harrison

Time topples Statyllios like a doddery oak.

Death hauls the old queen off, but before he goes,
he solemnly dedicates to the God of Cock:

his summer frocks dyed Dayglo puce
one shoulder-length, blonde, greasy, lacquered wig
two glittering, sequined, high-heeled shoes an overnight grip stuffed full of drag
and flutes still smelling of cachous and booze.

cachou

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